大学英语四级作文范文(doc 23页)

大学英语四级作文范文内容提要：
范文：
Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Celebrities as the Products’ Spokesmen. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 明星代言现象很普遍。 2. 明星代言广告存在一些问题。　3. 我的看法。
Celebrities as the Products’ Spokesmen
In the contemporary society, it is very common for celebrities, or the so-called superstars, to be spokesmen or representatives for a wide variety of products. Celebrities’ advertisements can be easily found on the Internet, televisions, newspapers, magazines and even on the walls of some buildings.
There are, however, some problems for celebrities and the consumers. To begin with, before representing, a star may know nothing about the product. Thus, consumers may be misled. Even worse, for the sake of money, some stars advertise for items with low quality, even for fake commodities. In the case of Sanlu, the public image of stars involved was spoiled. Last but not least, the high income of advertising does not deserve their labor, which widens the gap between the poor and the rich.
From my point of view, it is high time that measures were taken to eliminate the demerits. Firstly, laws should be worked out to regulate celebrities’ advertising. Secondly, stars should be required to tell the truth to the public. Only by doing so can stars be trusted by their fans and can consumers benefit. (183 words)
第一段思路点评：简单描述明星代言的现象。
语言点提示：a wide variety of products 琳琅满目的商品
第二段思路点评：指出明星代言存在的一些问题，注意使用的连接词语：to begin with, even worse, last but not least。
语言点提示：for the sake of 为了…的利益
第三段思路点评：针对这一现象，谈谈自己的看法。
语言点提示：eliminate the demerits 解决这些负面问题。regulate celebrities’ advertising 规范明星代言

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